Kamis, 28 November 2013

How do you like my story idea?

Q. Subject #0-DNT-KR-0 is a cold-blooded clone, born in a lab, raised to kill. Since the first day he could hold a gun, he has trained in an arena against the worlds top spetsnas, MI-6, and Shayetet 13 soldiers. Many days, the only thing that keeps him alive is his bio-engineered ability to regenerate from critical wounds in seconds. Soon, #0 is outdated, and marked for 'disposal' for requiring a constant supply of energy. He is shot execution-style, his body left to rot, but he is alive and healing as he crawls through the compound's muddy courtyard, and into the night.
So, I'm gonna be a lot less professional now, just to cut things short, as this is getting extremely long. He breaks into a woman's house, where she shoots him repeatedly, and is amazed when he remains unphased and calm. He disarms her, and is about to kill her, when she pleads for her life. new to this action, he agrees to spare her long enough for her to explain. Soon enough, he drops the gun and runs away. The next night, he comes to her again, eyes filled with child-like curiosity, asking her questions and giving her what few answers he can. A bond forms, she pities him, and agrees to let him live in the basement, provided the door is locked from the outside by six padlocks at night. The woman says her name is Alex Stratus, and they agree on giving him the name Dante Karo, deprived from the number tattooed on his arm; 0-DNT-KR-0.
During the story, many things happen as he learns to be human, but they really don't affect the story line much, since at the climax he still goes to the lab (which he discovers to be a Chinese military facility) for revenge. He finds a revised clone of himself that doesn't require the insulin he did. Like Alex, Dante sees this as a chance to salvage an empty soul. He tries to quickly explain morals to the clone, but his words are without meaning. Dante leaves the compound and alerts the military of its existence. The heads of the pentagon refuse to attack, but Dante tells them everything, then shows them his power. they agree to attack the compound if he lets them experiment on him, and he is sent to the compound once again, in hopes of capturing (or killing) the new clone.
What do you think? I revised this question, and believe I hit the bases running, but a second opinion would be nice.

A. I like that. It's far more original then some of the stuff I read on here.

Make sure you finish it and good luck. :)

M.S.


A movie of a woman that seeks revenge by the murder of its son?
Q. Someone knows about some movie of a woman that murder its son in a market or pharmacy and the unique thing that manages to see of the murderer is a tattooing of dragon. She wants to avenge its death and she meets a men, they are courted and when they are in the intimacy sees that has the tattooing. I do not remember very well it others but if someone knows and the title can give me I go itself it to thank. I suppose that the movie is of the 90, I am not sure.

A. Blue Tiger (1994)





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