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Rabu, 11 Juni 2014

Kardashian Konfusion.. Don't white guys like exotic women?

Q. I guess I could best describe my self by putting it this way.. I suppose I'm exotic looking like a Kardashian. Tall and voluptuous like Kloe, college educated like Kourtney, and beautiful in the face like Kim. The only thing is.. I'm still single! My "type" is generally a tall, tattooed, cute, white guy with an artistic side (something you see plenty of in Seattle). So is it me? Why can't I get this particular group of males to hit on me or ask me out? Any insight would help? Thanks! :)
Btw... I am not high maintenance like the Kardashians seem to be. I'm really down to earth and low key.. if that helps you're assessment, lol.

A. Hi well maybe ur giving out a negative stuck up vibe, hence guys will stay clear I get it all the time lol
I am 5'10" tall blonde slim body big boobs ,guys are a afraid LOL �


Many days ago I asked a woman to marry me. I haven't heard from her since then. My question or questions; did?
Q. Many days ago I asked a woman to marry me. I haven't heard from her since then. My question or questions; did I scare her away? We had a great relationship and I said if we don't get married, no change. BTW this is just online, if it matters. She did say she was very busy. She's in Seattle, I'm in Ohio. And it's hot there.
Some new stuff: she's 60 I'm 42, she has kids I do too, she's married in real life. We're both writers and we've known each other about 2 years. Oh and I have her name tattooed on me.

A. I guess it depends on how frequently you were in contact *before* you asked her to marry you. If it wasn't unusual for days to go by without communicating with eachother, then I don't think you need to worry too much. But if you typically were in touch every day, and now she has gone quiet, that is probably not good news.

Since she's still married, obviously it's not simple for her to marry you instead - she has to get divorced first, and clearly with kids involved that isn't any easier.

So even if she does want to marry you, it could be several years before that could happen, and she just might not be ready to take the step of starting down that path.





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Selasa, 20 Mei 2014

Tattoos, piercings in Japan?

Q. I've heard something, i don't know what.. i'm hoping someone can tell me here.. that people in Japan look down on people with tattoos???
I of course have both my arms covered in tattoos, and i'm going to japan in a couple of months.... i'm wondering if it's true and why it is, if so!?

And, how about piercings???
Is it popular for people over there to get piercings, as it is here in the west?!

Thank you!!

A. In general, yes, people in Japan do not like tattoos and piercings.

However, as a foreigner, you are sort of excempt from some of that. You're already seen as an outsider, from a different culture. Still, there are plenty of foreigners without them, so why you?

Tattoos are associated with the yakuza (Japanese mafia). It's extremely rare to see a Japanese with a tattoo without some connection to the mafia.

Piercings are for women.

Japan is strange in that some ways it seems almost anti-nature. Just look at the way all the rivers are cemented up. Yet on the other hand, an un-tattooed, un-pierced body is revered.

Why? It just is. I agree with it too. The human body is so beautiful just as it is.

Even from a Western pov, that's all sort of passe. I thought that was supposed to die out along with the Seattle scene (grunge). Nirvana died in 1994.


Know of any wicked female tattoo artists in Seattle?
Q. Well, I'm going for a visit to Seattle, and nothing is more fun than getting a tattoo'd in a new city! I would really like this tattoo done by a woman, it would be a first for me. I'm thinking of some kind of asian/buddhist pattern... anyway, any thoughts?
Thanks!

A. Christy broker - award winning artist
www.christybrooker.com

Madame Lazonga (no really im not kidding here)
www.vyvyn.com

Darcy Nutt
www.slavetotheneedle.com

Hope this helps. Make sure you check out portfolios, they give a good indication if an artist can do the right style for what youre looking for.

And to the above, if they disinfect the needes first i hope you run very very very far away. Needles should be brand new fresh out of a STERILE packet. (that by the way in some states the artist has to open infront of the customer or its illegal)





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Rabu, 05 Februari 2014

Looking for a personal review or reference for a tattoo artist in Seattle, WA?

Q. I am taking a trip to Seattle over the new year, and I'm hoping to get a tattoo while I'm there.
I've already done some research on Google, and so far I'm leaning towards Stephanie at Madame Lazonga Tattoo.
Does anyone have a personal reference or review from a tattoo artist in Seattle?

As I said, I've already done some research, I'm looking for personal experience.
Looking for a reference for ANY tattoo artist, not necessarily limited to Stephanie at Madame Lazonga Tattoo.

A. Hello --- i go to Magenta at Diamond Tattoo in Kent. Here is a video of the tattoos she
has done. The leg one is a cover up and it's now 4 days old. There is more to go as after
4 plus hours the skin said no more and we had to give it a rest until later, so the highlights
and color are still to be put in. Hopefully you are going before the 12th of January as she
will be out here in florida to do the all women artists tattoo convention.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gc9lxylaPnU

Hope this is a help.


Tattoos, piercings in Japan?
Q. I've heard something, i don't know what.. i'm hoping someone can tell me here.. that people in Japan look down on people with tattoos???
I of course have both my arms covered in tattoos, and i'm going to japan in a couple of months.... i'm wondering if it's true and why it is, if so!?

And, how about piercings???
Is it popular for people over there to get piercings, as it is here in the west?!

Thank you!!

A. In general, yes, people in Japan do not like tattoos and piercings.

However, as a foreigner, you are sort of excempt from some of that. You're already seen as an outsider, from a different culture. Still, there are plenty of foreigners without them, so why you?

Tattoos are associated with the yakuza (Japanese mafia). It's extremely rare to see a Japanese with a tattoo without some connection to the mafia.

Piercings are for women.

Japan is strange in that some ways it seems almost anti-nature. Just look at the way all the rivers are cemented up. Yet on the other hand, an un-tattooed, un-pierced body is revered.

Why? It just is. I agree with it too. The human body is so beautiful just as it is.

Even from a Western pov, that's all sort of passe. I thought that was supposed to die out along with the Seattle scene (grunge). Nirvana died in 1994.





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Kamis, 30 Januari 2014

Know of any wicked female tattoo artists in Seattle?

Q. Well, I'm going for a visit to Seattle, and nothing is more fun than getting a tattoo'd in a new city! I would really like this tattoo done by a woman, it would be a first for me. I'm thinking of some kind of asian/buddhist pattern... anyway, any thoughts?
Thanks!

A. Christy broker - award winning artist
www.christybrooker.com

Madame Lazonga (no really im not kidding here)
www.vyvyn.com

Darcy Nutt
www.slavetotheneedle.com

Hope this helps. Make sure you check out portfolios, they give a good indication if an artist can do the right style for what youre looking for.

And to the above, if they disinfect the needes first i hope you run very very very far away. Needles should be brand new fresh out of a STERILE packet. (that by the way in some states the artist has to open infront of the customer or its illegal)


How to talk to women that you just meet?
Q. I am wondering how i would go about asking a woman out on a date if i have never spoke with her before that moment.Like if im buying something at a store and she is the cashier or if i see her walking in the store. I know looks arent everything but if she is attractive then we would have to hang out in order to get to know each other. Thanks.

A. You need to look for reasons to strike up a conversation. Does she have an interesting tattoo? Is she reading a book? Does she have on some kind of interesting clothing? Simply make a comment about that.

Then before you ask her out, you need to make things personal. This will make you seem like a normal person, not some kind of creep. To do this you ask her opinion about something or otherwise get her to contribute something personal to the conversation. LIke:

You: Hey you're wearing a University of Washington sweatshirt. Are you from Seattle?
Her: Yeah, I lived there for 5 years.
You: Oh, that's cool. What did you study?
Her: I studied art. Mostly oil painting.

Then you just ask her out.

You: I think artistic women are really attractive. Hey, I've gotta run, but I'd love to meet you for coffee and get to know you better. Give me your number.
Her: 555-555-5555

Then all you need to do is call her and ask her out.

I hope this helps.





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Selasa, 28 Januari 2014

Has anyone heard of the Kirkland recent murder of this one family with a wife and two kids?

Q. I've read stories. This guy stabbed a women and her two young kids to death. Then set the house on fire. Do you guys have anything to say to this? I say it's sad 'cause the dad came all the way from somewhere and see's pics of his family..
Be seirous please. Thank you so far.

A. Kirkland murder suspect says he blacked out, woke up among victims' bodies
By Noel S. Brady and Erica Hall
The King County Journal
July 21
The 24-year-old man arrested in the brutal stabbings of four members of a Kirkland family told police he awoke in his neighbor's home Monday morning covered in blood, with their butchered bodies strewn around him. Conner Michael Schierman said he had blacked out some time Sunday morning after a binge of heavy drinking, documents filed Thursday in King County Superior Court say.

When he awoke to the carnage that was left, he said, he panicked and doused the house with gasoline and set it ablaze to conceal his crime.

A judge Thursday set bail for Schierman at $4 million. On Monday, prosecutors plan to file charges of arson and four counts of aggravated first-degree murder in the deaths of Olga Milkin, her two young boys, Justin and Andrew, and her sister, Lyuba Botvina.

Schierman could face the death penalty if convicted.

But even as Schierman, a 2000 graduate of Newport High School, appeared in shackles in a King County courtroom, a portrait drawn from interviews with friends and employers emerged of a vastly different person - a young man described as caring, introspective, a nice guy and a gentleman.

But drinking - and blackouts - were also part of that portrait.

Meanwhile, as Kirkland police continued their investigation on Slater Avenue Northeast, where Schierman recently moved into a duplex directly across from the Milkins' home, Sgt. Leonid Milkin made his first visit home.

Just in from Iraq where he has been serving with the Washington National Guard, Milkin arrived about noon Thursday at the charred remains of the house he and his wife Olga had been remodeling. Still wearing his combat fatigues, he entered the building with investigators.

In his own writings on the Internet, Schierman reveals himself as "a product of divorce and abuse," and a friend said his father was alcoholic.

He also wrote of his own recent struggle with alcoholism followed by a period of deep self-examination and recovery. His words hint at his inner turmoil, but they offer no warning of what prosecutors believe was about to explode.

"I don't know if there is something below the surface," said Senior King County Deputy Prosecutor Scott O'Toole. "We're still trying to figure that out.

"As far as I know right now, he's the only suspect," O'Toole said. "He admits to setting the fire. He admits to leaving the victims' house covered in blood."

At 6 feet and 210 pounds, Schierman shuffled into a small courtroom Thursday afternoon at the King County Jail in Seattle, wearing handcuffs, leg irons and special, white jail uniform emblazoned with the words "Ultra Security Inmate."

Several of his dozen or so friends and relatives who came to see his first court appearance broke down in tears and held each other as Schierman rounded a corner to face the judge.

"It's a very tragic case," said defense attorney James Conroy. "He has support from the community. He has had no involvement with the criminal justice system whatsoever."

Investigators first declared the house fire a crime scene a few hours after the flames were extinguished Monday, when a fire dog detected the presence of some type of fuel accelerant in several areas of the house.

At least two witnesses who said they saw Schierman outside the house shortly before the fire erupted helped lead police to him, O'Toole said.

They identified Schierman by his tattoos and several prominent scratches on his face, which he sustained when his victims tried to fight him off, the prosecutor said.

The King County medical examiner found defensive wounds on the hands and arms of all four victims, O'Toole said. Milkin, her sister and 5-year-old son Justin each were found with numerous stab wounds to their face and neck areas. Three-year-old Andrew's throat was slit.

"The damage done to the victims and their bodies was pretty horrendous and complete," O'Toole said.

Police served a search warrant Wednesday at Schierman's residence directly across the street from the Milkins' house. Schierman was then arrested in the Rose Hill area.

According to court documents, police recovered a knife when they arrested him. But it was unclear if police believe it to be a knife used in the murders. No description of the knife was available.

Meanwhile, friends and co-workers struggled to comprehend the possibility that a man they knew as thoughtful and hard-working could be arrested for such brutal crimes. Though some knew of his drinking problem, no one ever thought he could be capable of such violence.

"He's a really nice guy. He's definitely a gentleman. Always opened the doors for people," said a friend who asked that she not be named. "As far as I can tell they have the wrong guy."

Sue Gemmill, the property manager at Carillon Properties in Kirkland, where Schierman has worked since February 2005, called him "a really good employee. ... We're just as shocked as everybody else in the community."

His former employer Carl McGavran, manager of Sierra Fish and Pets in Factoria, said Schierman was a good worker, but had a drinking problem that eventually spiraled out of control.

Schierman was drinking so much he was blacking out, and he stopped showing up for work. "He didn't come into work for a week or more and he knew that was that. At some point after that, he went into rehab," McGavran said.

From rehab, Schierman went to a halfway house, where he apparently did quite well. McGavran didn't see Schierman during that time, but the two shot pool together recently. Schierman appeared to be staying clean.

"Probably the last three times we've shot pool, he didn't drink a drop," McGavran said.

He said Schierman didn't mention that anything was bothering him. "He talked to me about his job and he seemed to be really happy about the work. Some guy was showing him the ropes," he said.

He said Schierman also seemed excited to be moving into the duplex at 9523 Slater Ave.

Police don't know, or won't say, if Schierman had any contact with Olga Milkin or any of the other victims prior to the murders.

After months of problems with his previous tenants, complaints from Milkin and other neighbors of loud partying and fast driving finally led the landlord to evict the residents of both units in the modest, gray duplex.

About two months ago, Schierman's younger sister, Kinsey, and her friend Sean Winter moved into one of the units. Schierman moved in about a month later on July 1, the landlord said.

The problems, and complaints, stopped. After the amount of partying that had been going on at the house before, neighbors said, they were happy that Schierman seemed quiet and well-mannered.

Schierman's landlord said Olga Milkin spoke to the man at least once before.

"She had spoken to him. I don't know to what extent," said the landlord who spoke on condition he not be identified.

Milkin told him she liked the new tenants, including Schierman. She said she offered him the use of her row boat on nearby Forbes Lake.

"He told me he was clean and sober," he said of Schierman. "He had good references, no criminal problems.

"It's hard to believe that somebody that appeared so good could turn on a dime like that."

Olga's husband, Leonid, arrived at the neighborhood Thursday in a black civilian SUV just before noon.

He stopped at the memorial in front, got out and looked at the photos and flowers, surrounded by family members. Shortly afterward, he got back in the car, which was driven by a family friend, and left the area.

John Petrus, Olga's brother-in-law, said the Army and his family are helping Leonid.

"The family is staying together," he said.

Noel Brady can be reached at noel.brady@kingcountyjournal.com or 425-453-4252. Erica Hall can be reached at 425-453-4234 or erica.hall@kingcountyjournal.com.

Service on Sunday

# A memorial service for the slain Milkin family members will be held at 3:30 p.m. Sunday at The City Church in Kirkland, at 9051 132nd Ave. N.E.

Memorial Fund

# A memorial fund for the family of the victims has been established. Donations may be made to the Milkin Family fund at any US Bank branch.

Police Tip Line

# Anyone with information that might help police solve this crime is asked to call the Kirkland Police Department at 425-587-3515.


In the USA are the emergency rooms in all hospitals taken up by Mexicans, Pakistanis, and other immigrants who?
Q. don't pay health care?

Here in the UK although we have free healthcare under the National Health System, it is overloaded by use from 3rd world immigrants

A. Interesting question. I had to go to E.R. two days in a row, last month (serious allergic reaction they couldn't get under control).

I live close to an Indian Reservation (Native Americans). We have a very large influx of Hispanics here right now, tending all the berry fields for winter. We also have a very large Indian (from the country India) population here.

There were probably 50 people at the E.R. There was one Native American woman there, who had either been beat up, or was in a car accident. She was really bruised up, poor thing.

Other than that, everyone else was white.

I'd say for every single legitimate emergency patient there however, one of the people there was simply seeking drugs (pain meds).

The white father who was there with his white daughter (about 3 yrs old) got very poor service in my opinion. The child really was very ill. Completely limp and obviously running a really high fever. That Dad had been there six hours without being seen. In my opinion, that little child should have been seen much faster. I can only assume it was because of all of the father's obvious gang/prison tattoos, the way he was dressed (gang clothes) and his general body language. I must say though, he never lost his cool, never shouted, never swore, but the staff was obviously put off by him, which meant his daughter didn't get fair/timely care.

I would say at least 50% of the the people in the waiting room (even though they were white) were not paying health care costs. Many were on welfare, and many were indigent. One elderly bum came in just before I was taken back. The staff greeted him by his first name and told him to have a seat. They didn't even check him in.

Personally, I don't think it's fair to judge someone by the color of their skin, and decide if they do, or do not pay their health care costs.

I know of one black plastic surgeon. If you ran into him on the weekend, you would probably think he was a gardener, or even a street person, because of his clothes. Of course you'd also be really confused when you saw him get into his $90,000 car. He just happens to be one of those men who likes his old, tatty, comfortable clothes, and wears them on weekends. During the week, it's suits costing thousands of dollars.

~Garnet
Permaculture homesteading/farming over 20 years
Worked in the medical field over 15 years

P.S. I remember one of my patients. A very elderly white woman. She looked poor as a church mouse. Support hose puddled around her ankles, old shoes, cat's eye glasses repaired with a bit of wire, a formerly nice, but now threadbare coat. I was making a mental note to ask the doctor to give her plenty of samples, since I didn't think she could easily afford medication.

Then I took her registration paper, and started to get her entered. She lived in such an exclusive area of Seattle, the houses do not even have house numbers.

So her address looked something like this:
Mrs. Tittlemouse
The Highlands
Seattle, WA

She and I then began to chat about gardening. She told me about her Olympic sized swimming pool in her backyard. She had it filled in with dirt, so she could grow her tomatoes there, because the slugs didn't like to cross the concrete around it.

Never judge a book by it's cover.





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Sabtu, 09 November 2013

Know of any wicked female tattoo artists in Seattle?

Q. Well, I'm going for a visit to Seattle, and nothing is more fun than getting a tattoo'd in a new city! I would really like this tattoo done by a woman, it would be a first for me. I'm thinking of some kind of asian/buddhist pattern... anyway, any thoughts?
Thanks!

A. Christy broker - award winning artist
www.christybrooker.com

Madame Lazonga (no really im not kidding here)
www.vyvyn.com

Darcy Nutt
www.slavetotheneedle.com

Hope this helps. Make sure you check out portfolios, they give a good indication if an artist can do the right style for what youre looking for.

And to the above, if they disinfect the needes first i hope you run very very very far away. Needles should be brand new fresh out of a STERILE packet. (that by the way in some states the artist has to open infront of the customer or its illegal)


Could you critique my first chapter?
Q. "It was a team, a man and a woman, his girlfriend.They drove a dark colored luxury sedan...I'm thinking maybe a midnight blue Mercedes-Benz C-Class. " Patricia Schultz moved deftly through the neighborhood with the Pakistani couple who had contacted her close on her heels. Their foster daughter had disappeared without a trace and the police had no leads. Desperate for even an inkling, they had called her to perform a psychic reading. "Sound familiar?"

"No!" The wife insisted.

"Alright then. Someone saw them. I get that feeling very strongly. The man was very tall. At least six foot five, but probably a few inches taller. He has dark hair but shaves his head. I get the feeling that he is nearer to thirty than twenty,but not thirty.Maybe twenty-eightish? Pale olive skin with many tattoos. " Patricia let it go at that. "Let's move on." She closed her eyes and tried to envision the little girl. " I see dark hair.Thick. Wavy. Very long. Past her waist. Blue eyes? Tall for her age but slim. Maybe 10 years old?" Per her request she had not yet seen a picture of the missing child."I see a pearly colored sedan here in your drive way. Nothing threatening, a carpool I think. It came five days a week,so it must be a carpool. It's dropping her off. She's going in the house and she's being watched by the couple in the Benz. They've been watching her for well over a week."

"Who?!" The husband was clearly frustrated with her vagueness.

"Don't know yet." Patricia admitted. "Let's go inside,shall we?" When she was shown inside the couple's modest three bedroom ranch home. "By and by, who are her parents? Her birth parents?"

"Why?" The husband asked suspiciously.

"Her mother was an old friend of mine." The wife confessed.

"Was? Is she dead?" Patricia persisted.

"Not exactly...we don't really know where she is. "

"I see." Patricia allowed herself to become the missing girl again."She left her bag by the door along with her shoes and went to the Den." Her senses led her to the sofa. "She was here last. Asleep and that is how she left this house." She concluded. "The man and woman entered the house with a key a short time later. Again this was planned. The man made a beeline for the Den, while the woman went to her bedroom. They had been here before while you were away to scope out the place. The man, he relished hoisting the child off the sofa. He felt...fulfilled. He held her close and had to stop himself from running out the door with her but stuck to the preset plan...he whispered something in her ear." Patricia paused then decided to keep what she heard the man say to the child to herself. "The woman brought back a blanket from her bedroom and draped it over the child. Together they departed the house, appearing as nothing more than a couple with their sleeping child."

"Then what!?"The foster father demanded.

"They walked for about half a mile northeast of here to where they had parked the car, placed the sleeping child in the trunk and drove away." Patricia said coolly. What she had heard the man whisper to the child had greatly changed her demeanor toward the foster parents.

"In the trunk?!"

"Yes. Not for very long though. When they were perhaps 200 miles away, they placed her in the backseat and continued on."

"Where did they go!?" The foster mother was in near hysterics.

"First to the north, maybe to Seattle. Then on a plane and many and many miles away... I'm sorry, but the child isn't coming back. She's got a new life far, far away from here." Patricia concluded solemnly. She mentally broke her connection with the "missing" child and turned to face the foster parents. "She isn't coming back." She repeated again. "I'm sorry."

A. I think it ends okay. I think the first bit's a little long. It needs to be short, snappy, sweet. You really need to grab the readers attention and let them have no control over when to stop reading that story. I didn't really understand what the first paragraph was about until i read it again. If it was a real book, i would have put it down to be honest.
Try explaining the story first. You could start with the little girl.
lets say her names melinda.

Melinda tiptoed into her house that night. She had an eerie feeling that someone was watching her.
"That can't be right" She whispered. "I'm safe."
Her voice broke the silence. In her mind the danger was stretching, expanding and tugging at every piece of that moment. She sat on her couch, forced herself to relax. Why would anything get her? She was obviously being paranoid. But Oh, how wrong she was. She didn't know she'd be lost. Miles and miles away from her only relatives. It was up to her now.

Atleast now you can gather information about the story. Suddenly starting with commentary like: "it was a team, a man and a woman, his girlfriend" isn't proper english. You wouldn't write that but you would say it. That's what's confusing. Let the reader understand what's happening first unless its an action scene. I also think your first paragraph has too many long sentences and words. I think writing is sort of like a jigsaw puzzle. A mashup of simple sentences and complexities. It needs to fit together. Hope I helped.
Try answering my question :D





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Senin, 04 November 2013

Could you critique my first chapter?

Q. "It was a team, a man and a woman, his girlfriend.They drove a dark colored luxury sedan...I'm thinking maybe a midnight blue Mercedes-Benz C-Class. " Patricia Schultz moved deftly through the neighborhood with the Pakistani couple who had contacted her close on her heels. Their foster daughter had disappeared without a trace and the police had no leads. Desperate for even an inkling, they had called her to perform a psychic reading. "Sound familiar?"

"No!" The wife insisted.

"Alright then. Someone saw them. I get that feeling very strongly. The man was very tall. At least six foot five, but probably a few inches taller. He has dark hair but shaves his head. I get the feeling that he is nearer to thirty than twenty,but not thirty.Maybe twenty-eightish? Pale olive skin with many tattoos. " Patricia let it go at that. "Let's move on." She closed her eyes and tried to envision the little girl. " I see dark hair.Thick. Wavy. Very long. Past her waist. Blue eyes? Tall for her age but slim. Maybe 10 years old?" Per her request she had not yet seen a picture of the missing child."I see a pearly colored sedan here in your drive way. Nothing threatening, a carpool I think. It came five days a week,so it must be a carpool. It's dropping her off. She's going in the house and she's being watched by the couple in the Benz. They've been watching her for well over a week."

"Who?!" The husband was clearly frustrated with her vagueness.

"Don't know yet." Patricia admitted. "Let's go inside,shall we?" When she was shown inside the couple's modest three bedroom ranch home. "By and by, who are her parents? Her birth parents?"

"Why?" The husband asked suspiciously.

"Her mother was an old friend of mine." The wife confessed.

"Was? Is she dead?" Patricia persisted.

"Not exactly...we don't really know where she is. "

"I see." Patricia allowed herself to become the missing girl again."She left her bag by the door along with her shoes and went to the Den." Her senses led her to the sofa. "She was here last. Asleep and that is how she left this house." She concluded. "The man and woman entered the house with a key a short time later. Again this was planned. The man made a beeline for the Den, while the woman went to her bedroom. They had been here before while you were away to scope out the place. The man, he relished hoisting the child off the sofa. He felt...fulfilled. He held her close and had to stop himself from running out the door with her but stuck to the preset plan...he whispered something in her ear." Patricia paused then decided to keep what she heard the man say to the child to herself. "The woman brought back a blanket from her bedroom and draped it over the child. Together they departed the house, appearing as nothing more than a couple with their sleeping child."

"Then what!?"The foster father demanded.

"They walked for about half a mile northeast of here to where they had parked the car, placed the sleeping child in the trunk and drove away." Patricia said coolly. What she had heard the man whisper to the child had greatly changed her demeanor toward the foster parents.

"In the trunk?!"

"Yes. Not for very long though. When they were perhaps 200 miles away, they placed her in the backseat and continued on."

"Where did they go!?" The foster mother was in near hysterics.

"First to the north, maybe to Seattle. Then on a plane and many and many miles away... I'm sorry, but the child isn't coming back. She's got a new life far, far away from here." Patricia concluded solemnly. She mentally broke her connection with the "missing" child and turned to face the foster parents. "She isn't coming back." She repeated again. "I'm sorry."

A. I think it ends okay. I think the first bit's a little long. It needs to be short, snappy, sweet. You really need to grab the readers attention and let them have no control over when to stop reading that story. I didn't really understand what the first paragraph was about until i read it again. If it was a real book, i would have put it down to be honest.
Try explaining the story first. You could start with the little girl.
lets say her names melinda.

Melinda tiptoed into her house that night. She had an eerie feeling that someone was watching her.
"That can't be right" She whispered. "I'm safe."
Her voice broke the silence. In her mind the danger was stretching, expanding and tugging at every piece of that moment. She sat on her couch, forced herself to relax. Why would anything get her? She was obviously being paranoid. But Oh, how wrong she was. She didn't know she'd be lost. Miles and miles away from her only relatives. It was up to her now.

Atleast now you can gather information about the story. Suddenly starting with commentary like: "it was a team, a man and a woman, his girlfriend" isn't proper english. You wouldn't write that but you would say it. That's what's confusing. Let the reader understand what's happening first unless its an action scene. I also think your first paragraph has too many long sentences and words. I think writing is sort of like a jigsaw puzzle. A mashup of simple sentences and complexities. It needs to fit together. Hope I helped.
Try answering my question :D


Looking for a personal review or reference for a tattoo artist in Seattle, WA?
Q. I am taking a trip to Seattle over the new year, and I'm hoping to get a tattoo while I'm there.
I've already done some research on Google, and so far I'm leaning towards Stephanie at Madame Lazonga Tattoo.
Does anyone have a personal reference or review from a tattoo artist in Seattle?

As I said, I've already done some research, I'm looking for personal experience.
Looking for a reference for ANY tattoo artist, not necessarily limited to Stephanie at Madame Lazonga Tattoo.

A. Hello --- i go to Magenta at Diamond Tattoo in Kent. Here is a video of the tattoos she
has done. The leg one is a cover up and it's now 4 days old. There is more to go as after
4 plus hours the skin said no more and we had to give it a rest until later, so the highlights
and color are still to be put in. Hopefully you are going before the 12th of January as she
will be out here in florida to do the all women artists tattoo convention.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gc9lxylaPnU

Hope this is a help.





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Rabu, 16 Oktober 2013

Could you critique my first chapter?

Q. "It was a team, a man and a woman, his girlfriend.They drove a dark colored luxury sedan...I'm thinking maybe a midnight blue Mercedes-Benz C-Class. " Patricia Schultz moved deftly through the neighborhood with the Pakistani couple who had contacted her close on her heels. Their foster daughter had disappeared without a trace and the police had no leads. Desperate for even an inkling, they had called her to perform a psychic reading. "Sound familiar?"

"No!" The wife insisted.

"Alright then. Someone saw them. I get that feeling very strongly. The man was very tall. At least six foot five, but probably a few inches taller. He has dark hair but shaves his head. I get the feeling that he is nearer to thirty than twenty,but not thirty.Maybe twenty-eightish? Pale olive skin with many tattoos. " Patricia let it go at that. "Let's move on." She closed her eyes and tried to envision the little girl. " I see dark hair.Thick. Wavy. Very long. Past her waist. Blue eyes? Tall for her age but slim. Maybe 10 years old?" Per her request she had not yet seen a picture of the missing child."I see a pearly colored sedan here in your drive way. Nothing threatening, a carpool I think. It came five days a week,so it must be a carpool. It's dropping her off. She's going in the house and she's being watched by the couple in the Benz. They've been watching her for well over a week."

"Who?!" The husband was clearly frustrated with her vagueness.

"Don't know yet." Patricia admitted. "Let's go inside,shall we?" When she was shown inside the couple's modest three bedroom ranch home. "By and by, who are her parents? Her birth parents?"

"Why?" The husband asked suspiciously.

"Her mother was an old friend of mine." The wife confessed.

"Was? Is she dead?" Patricia persisted.

"Not exactly...we don't really know where she is. "

"I see." Patricia allowed herself to become the missing girl again."She left her bag by the door along with her shoes and went to the Den." Her senses led her to the sofa. "She was here last. Asleep and that is how she left this house." She concluded. "The man and woman entered the house with a key a short time later. Again this was planned. The man made a beeline for the Den, while the woman went to her bedroom. They had been here before while you were away to scope out the place. The man, he relished hoisting the child off the sofa. He felt...fulfilled. He held her close and had to stop himself from running out the door with her but stuck to the preset plan...he whispered something in her ear." Patricia paused then decided to keep what she heard the man say to the child to herself. "The woman brought back a blanket from her bedroom and draped it over the child. Together they departed the house, appearing as nothing more than a couple with their sleeping child."

"Then what!?"The foster father demanded.

"They walked for about half a mile northeast of here to where they had parked the car, placed the sleeping child in the trunk and drove away." Patricia said coolly. What she had heard the man whisper to the child had greatly changed her demeanor toward the foster parents.

"In the trunk?!"

"Yes. Not for very long though. When they were perhaps 200 miles away, they placed her in the backseat and continued on."

"Where did they go!?" The foster mother was in near hysterics.

"First to the north, maybe to Seattle. Then on a plane and many and many miles away... I'm sorry, but the child isn't coming back. She's got a new life far, far away from here." Patricia concluded solemnly. She mentally broke her connection with the "missing" child and turned to face the foster parents. "She isn't coming back." She repeated again. "I'm sorry."

A. I think it ends okay. I think the first bit's a little long. It needs to be short, snappy, sweet. You really need to grab the readers attention and let them have no control over when to stop reading that story. I didn't really understand what the first paragraph was about until i read it again. If it was a real book, i would have put it down to be honest.
Try explaining the story first. You could start with the little girl.
lets say her names melinda.

Melinda tiptoed into her house that night. She had an eerie feeling that someone was watching her.
"That can't be right" She whispered. "I'm safe."
Her voice broke the silence. In her mind the danger was stretching, expanding and tugging at every piece of that moment. She sat on her couch, forced herself to relax. Why would anything get her? She was obviously being paranoid. But Oh, how wrong she was. She didn't know she'd be lost. Miles and miles away from her only relatives. It was up to her now.

Atleast now you can gather information about the story. Suddenly starting with commentary like: "it was a team, a man and a woman, his girlfriend" isn't proper english. You wouldn't write that but you would say it. That's what's confusing. Let the reader understand what's happening first unless its an action scene. I also think your first paragraph has too many long sentences and words. I think writing is sort of like a jigsaw puzzle. A mashup of simple sentences and complexities. It needs to fit together. Hope I helped.
Try answering my question :D


Looking for a personal review or reference for a tattoo artist in Seattle, WA?
Q. I am taking a trip to Seattle over the new year, and I'm hoping to get a tattoo while I'm there.
I've already done some research on Google, and so far I'm leaning towards Stephanie at Madame Lazonga Tattoo.
Does anyone have a personal reference or review from a tattoo artist in Seattle?

As I said, I've already done some research, I'm looking for personal experience.
Looking for a reference for ANY tattoo artist, not necessarily limited to Stephanie at Madame Lazonga Tattoo.

A. Hello --- i go to Magenta at Diamond Tattoo in Kent. Here is a video of the tattoos she
has done. The leg one is a cover up and it's now 4 days old. There is more to go as after
4 plus hours the skin said no more and we had to give it a rest until later, so the highlights
and color are still to be put in. Hopefully you are going before the 12th of January as she
will be out here in florida to do the all women artists tattoo convention.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gc9lxylaPnU

Hope this is a help.





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Kamis, 19 September 2013

Tattoos for scar coverage?

Q. Years ago I used to be a self harmer, the scars left behind arnt as bad as some that I've seen but they are noticeable & it's awkward when people notice, I hate it. So I was thinking of getting a tatto on my left fore arm, kind of like a sleeve but not so full on coverage. What are your opinions, should I go for it or not? Im desperate to cover the scars but I also know that if I didn't have the scars, I probably would never have a tattoo on my arm. X

A. Definitely get it! There's this world famous tattoo artist in Seattle who does a lot of cover up tattoos for various scars, for anything from breast cancer to scars. She's really amazing. I don't know where you live, but I'm sure there are tattoo artists by you that can do a good job. Just make sure they are skilled enough. Anyways, take a look at this woman's page...click on 'portfolio' and then click 'cover ups'. It has both the before and after photos

http://vyvynlazonga.com/home.html


Tattoos, piercings in Japan?
Q. I've heard something, i don't know what.. i'm hoping someone can tell me here.. that people in Japan look down on people with tattoos???
I of course have both my arms covered in tattoos, and i'm going to japan in a couple of months.... i'm wondering if it's true and why it is, if so!?

And, how about piercings???
Is it popular for people over there to get piercings, as it is here in the west?!

Thank you!!

A. In general, yes, people in Japan do not like tattoos and piercings.

However, as a foreigner, you are sort of excempt from some of that. You're already seen as an outsider, from a different culture. Still, there are plenty of foreigners without them, so why you?

Tattoos are associated with the yakuza (Japanese mafia). It's extremely rare to see a Japanese with a tattoo without some connection to the mafia.

Piercings are for women.

Japan is strange in that some ways it seems almost anti-nature. Just look at the way all the rivers are cemented up. Yet on the other hand, an un-tattooed, un-pierced body is revered.

Why? It just is. I agree with it too. The human body is so beautiful just as it is.

Even from a Western pov, that's all sort of passe. I thought that was supposed to die out along with the Seattle scene (grunge). Nirvana died in 1994.





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Rabu, 31 Juli 2013

Tattoos for scar coverage?

Q. Years ago I used to be a self harmer, the scars left behind arnt as bad as some that I've seen but they are noticeable & it's awkward when people notice, I hate it. So I was thinking of getting a tatto on my left fore arm, kind of like a sleeve but not so full on coverage. What are your opinions, should I go for it or not? Im desperate to cover the scars but I also know that if I didn't have the scars, I probably would never have a tattoo on my arm. X

A. Definitely get it! There's this world famous tattoo artist in Seattle who does a lot of cover up tattoos for various scars, for anything from breast cancer to scars. She's really amazing. I don't know where you live, but I'm sure there are tattoo artists by you that can do a good job. Just make sure they are skilled enough. Anyways, take a look at this woman's page...click on 'portfolio' and then click 'cover ups'. It has both the before and after photos

http://vyvynlazonga.com/home.html


Tattoos, piercings in Japan?
Q. I've heard something, i don't know what.. i'm hoping someone can tell me here.. that people in Japan look down on people with tattoos???
I of course have both my arms covered in tattoos, and i'm going to japan in a couple of months.... i'm wondering if it's true and why it is, if so!?

And, how about piercings???
Is it popular for people over there to get piercings, as it is here in the west?!

Thank you!!

A. In general, yes, people in Japan do not like tattoos and piercings.

However, as a foreigner, you are sort of excempt from some of that. You're already seen as an outsider, from a different culture. Still, there are plenty of foreigners without them, so why you?

Tattoos are associated with the yakuza (Japanese mafia). It's extremely rare to see a Japanese with a tattoo without some connection to the mafia.

Piercings are for women.

Japan is strange in that some ways it seems almost anti-nature. Just look at the way all the rivers are cemented up. Yet on the other hand, an un-tattooed, un-pierced body is revered.

Why? It just is. I agree with it too. The human body is so beautiful just as it is.

Even from a Western pov, that's all sort of passe. I thought that was supposed to die out along with the Seattle scene (grunge). Nirvana died in 1994.





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Selasa, 09 Juli 2013

In the USA are the emergency rooms in all hospitals taken up by Mexicans, Pakistanis, and other immigrants who?

Q. don't pay health care?

Here in the UK although we have free healthcare under the National Health System, it is overloaded by use from 3rd world immigrants

A. Interesting question. I had to go to E.R. two days in a row, last month (serious allergic reaction they couldn't get under control).

I live close to an Indian Reservation (Native Americans). We have a very large influx of Hispanics here right now, tending all the berry fields for winter. We also have a very large Indian (from the country India) population here.

There were probably 50 people at the E.R. There was one Native American woman there, who had either been beat up, or was in a car accident. She was really bruised up, poor thing.

Other than that, everyone else was white.

I'd say for every single legitimate emergency patient there however, one of the people there was simply seeking drugs (pain meds).

The white father who was there with his white daughter (about 3 yrs old) got very poor service in my opinion. The child really was very ill. Completely limp and obviously running a really high fever. That Dad had been there six hours without being seen. In my opinion, that little child should have been seen much faster. I can only assume it was because of all of the father's obvious gang/prison tattoos, the way he was dressed (gang clothes) and his general body language. I must say though, he never lost his cool, never shouted, never swore, but the staff was obviously put off by him, which meant his daughter didn't get fair/timely care.

I would say at least 50% of the the people in the waiting room (even though they were white) were not paying health care costs. Many were on welfare, and many were indigent. One elderly bum came in just before I was taken back. The staff greeted him by his first name and told him to have a seat. They didn't even check him in.

Personally, I don't think it's fair to judge someone by the color of their skin, and decide if they do, or do not pay their health care costs.

I know of one black plastic surgeon. If you ran into him on the weekend, you would probably think he was a gardener, or even a street person, because of his clothes. Of course you'd also be really confused when you saw him get into his $90,000 car. He just happens to be one of those men who likes his old, tatty, comfortable clothes, and wears them on weekends. During the week, it's suits costing thousands of dollars.

~Garnet
Permaculture homesteading/farming over 20 years
Worked in the medical field over 15 years

P.S. I remember one of my patients. A very elderly white woman. She looked poor as a church mouse. Support hose puddled around her ankles, old shoes, cat's eye glasses repaired with a bit of wire, a formerly nice, but now threadbare coat. I was making a mental note to ask the doctor to give her plenty of samples, since I didn't think she could easily afford medication.

Then I took her registration paper, and started to get her entered. She lived in such an exclusive area of Seattle, the houses do not even have house numbers.

So her address looked something like this:
Mrs. Tittlemouse
The Highlands
Seattle, WA

She and I then began to chat about gardening. She told me about her Olympic sized swimming pool in her backyard. She had it filled in with dirt, so she could grow her tomatoes there, because the slugs didn't like to cross the concrete around it.

Never judge a book by it's cover.


Know of any wicked female tattoo artists in Seattle?
Q. Well, I'm going for a visit to Seattle, and nothing is more fun than getting a tattoo'd in a new city! I would really like this tattoo done by a woman, it would be a first for me. I'm thinking of some kind of asian/buddhist pattern... anyway, any thoughts?
Thanks!

A. Christy broker - award winning artist
www.christybrooker.com

Madame Lazonga (no really im not kidding here)
www.vyvyn.com

Darcy Nutt
www.slavetotheneedle.com

Hope this helps. Make sure you check out portfolios, they give a good indication if an artist can do the right style for what youre looking for.

And to the above, if they disinfect the needes first i hope you run very very very far away. Needles should be brand new fresh out of a STERILE packet. (that by the way in some states the artist has to open infront of the customer or its illegal)





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